this is a song composed by me and my friend...

This is mine: 3 words of love

in the night as the angels sleep..
i'm still awake looking at the stars above...
counting them thinking they wont match on how much i love you..
every count it made my heart skips a beat...

if everyday i could be with you...
then i dont need Eden anymore...
for you are like God's kingdom...
your very being makes me shiver in happiness...

in this night only you i can think of..
thinking how lonely it is when i'm not with you mades me crazy...
i hope morning comes now so i can be with you...
and say the 3 words of i love you...

you've broken my heart a couple of times....
i almost ran out of thread putting it back together...
i just cant hate you at all...
i cant despise the person who made me feel like i'm alive

in this night only you i can think of..
thinking how lonely it is when i'm not with you mades me crazy...
i hope morning comes now so i can be with you...
and say the 3 words of i love you...

i just cant get enough of you...
your beautiful black hair that tangles in my hand...
your deep brown eyes that see right through me...
your gentle bright smile that makes me weak...

in this night only you i can think of..
thinking how lonely it is when i'm not with you mades me crazy...
i hope morning comes now so i can be with you...
and say the 3 words of i love you...

as this song ends... as the morning sun arise...
the angels wakes up and brought me to you...
their giving me my prize for being in love with you for so long...
the 3 words that you whispered as you hugged me..
the 3 word of I love you



My friend's: (it has no title yet)

You are,
the angel of life
You are,
the light in the dark.
You are,
the one who makes me smile.
You are,
the being in my heart.

Every time when I'm with you, I always try so hard just to look upon you.
You just being by me makes me warm, as though you're the sun shining down on me
You're hair is always dancing in the wind, taking my breath away with every single look.
You're eyes are burning up my skin, making me feel like im insane. xD
But I'm so happy when you look at me, just because you're smiling right at me

You are,
the angel in my life.
You are,
the light in the dark.
You are,
the one who makes me smile.
You are,
the being in my heart.

I try my best to comfort you with my warmth, but all you do is let me stand by your side.
But that is not enough, Will I ever be able to hold you in my arms.
I don't know what to do, but girl can't you see I'm so crazy about you.
So please tell me where to start,cause my love for you is tearing me apart.
I don't mind and I dont care, just be the angel that lights up my heart in the dark

You are,
the angel in my life.
You are,
the light in the dark.
You are,
the one who makes me smile.
You are,
the being in my heart.

You are the angel of my life.Thank you God for what you let me find.

Please decide...

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